This is good description of the music video in terms of its style and form. Do ensure examples are specific and relevant in discussion of the music video convention. It would be good to use ideas from Negus and make links to actual music video through the use of hyperlinks. Making explicit these conventions will highlight your understanding of these. I very much like the way in which you have laid out your understanding of media codes and conventions of the artist website homepage. You could have added more explanation of the function of the website and you could have made further comparisons to other real media products. Good work - do revise in the light of my comments & add both discussion of the CD digipak & evaluate the question set. What conventions did you use, develop and challenge?
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ReplyDeleteThis is good description of the music video in terms of its style and form. Do ensure examples are specific and relevant in discussion of the music video convention. It would be good to use ideas from Negus and make links to actual music video through the use of hyperlinks. Making explicit these conventions will highlight your understanding of these.
I very much like the way in which you have laid out your understanding of media codes and conventions of the artist website homepage. You could have added more explanation of the function of the website and you could have made further comparisons to other real media products.
Good work - do revise in the light of my comments & add both discussion of the CD digipak & evaluate the question set. What conventions did you use, develop and challenge?