Pre Production: Narrative Action

• Max picks up beer

• The band prepare to practise their song ‘Bird On The Wire’

• Callum begins the song, bringing the beat in on the drums and chews gum aggressively 

• Max gets ready to start singing and shows his frustration towards Callum, the drummer, as he has been getting the song wrong

• Max briefly checks the takeaway menu and throws it down in frustration 

• Alfie sorts out his amp as he is about to play the guitar in their practise

• The band begin to rehearse their song properly as they are all in the swing of things

• They reach the end of the beginning of the song and Callum messes up his little break/solo section as he just enters in his own world and forgets what they had practised previously

• Max tells the band to stop playing and to take a break as he is so annoyed by Callum’s mistake

• Callum gets equally as annoyed and gets his phone out, shaking his head with irritation

• Alfie sits down and takes a drink, trying to avoid the tension between Callum and Max and just just starts to practise on his guitar

• Max sits down on the couch and picks up his beer just to try calm down and relax for a moment

• Max gets an unexpected text from a random number and has no idea who it is

• He panics and follows the directions of the text: call the number

• He picks up his jacket and walks outside just to get some privacy whilst phoning the number 

• He zips up his jacket when he finds somewhere to place his beer

• The he walks away from the garage to have some silence

• The attacker begins to follow Max very closely and has been hiding behind the garage all this time

• It then becomes clear that he was the one who sent the text and this whole situation was planned out in his mind

• Max is just about to ring the number when the attacker swings a baseball bat on his head

• Max passes out and is seriously injured