Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Pitch Feedback

Our feed back we received from our final pitch: 


  • Lay off the drugs-doesn't appeal to some audience members
  • Make sure it isn't just speaking to one specific audience- create a wider audience range. 
  • Choose a suitable song for the band to be practicing, only a snippet
  • Try and keep the location of the shoot close- we don't have that much time
  • Find a quote, which is a truism and link it e.g. 'Some old bastard said about 100 years ago that history doesn't repeat its rhymes' talking about Winston Churchill
  • Find someone well know from the music world

How we approached these changes:


  • We left the drug idea and decided to just have cigarettes and alcohol around the place instead of the musicians smoking them. This would distract them and cause the focus to be on irrelevant things
  • We decided on going for a large age group even as big as a 20 year span of ages
  • We researched into songs we could do and decided on rock/pop music probably 'Pandora Fox'. We chose the song 'Bird On The Wire' as it is easy to get permission from them and it is a cool, rocky kind of song, which is what we are going for
  • We decided on something even in school grounds maybe or in one of the boarding houses so its not to hard to get there. We left the Camberley idea and places too far away so that we get use of as much of the time we can get


  • We found a usain bolt quote that will fit well, 'It's always a wake-up call to get beaten'. Even though he isn't from the music world he is still an inspirational sportsman 
  • Thought about different handheld shots we could do e.g. around the faces, moving around instruments 



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